Adding a post based on a discussion Greg and I are having in regards to the Dylan song below and the one by Leonard Cohen in which he reminisces “I don’t mean to suggest that I loved you the best. I don’t keep track of each falling rock. (A nice additional dis, there). I remember you well in the Chelsea Hotel. That’s all, I don’t even think of you that often.”
This is basically an open-ended discussion about the reflection of past relationships in song by these poetical masters. In contrast to that dumbass song “you’re so vain, you probably think this song is about you” when in fact the song clearly IS about “you” (James Taylor) Our conclusion is that both Cohen and Dylan are much deeper and more mature in their approach to the subject matter.
Mama, You’ve Been On My Mind – by Bob Dylan
Perhaps it’s the color of the sun cut flat
An’ cov’rin’ the crossroads I’m standing at,
Or maybe it’s the weather or something like that,
But mama, you been on my mind.
I don’t mean trouble, please don’t put me down or get upset,
I am not pleadin’ or sayin’, “I can’t forget.”
I do not walk the floor bowed down an’ bent, but yet,
Mama, you been on my mind.
Even though my mind is hazy an’ my thoughts they might be narrow,
Where you been don’t bother me nor bring me down in sorrow.
It don’t even matter to me where you’re wakin’ up tomorrow,
But mama, you’re just on my mind.
I am not askin’ you to say words like “yes” or “no,”
Please understand me, I got no place for you t’ go.
I’m just breathin’ to myself, pretendin’ not that I don’t know,
Mama, you been on my mind.
When you wake up in the mornin’, baby, look inside your mirror.
You know I won’t be next to you, you know I won’t be near.
I’d just be curious to know if you can see yourself as clear
As someone who has had you on his mind.
(from Greg’s e-mail):
Particularly interesting, as regards our discussion of understatement, is his use of the double negative in the fourth stanza. “pretendin’ not that I don’t know”. That is, he’s admitting to himself that he’s thinking about her, even though he goes to great pains to say, “Hey, I’m not that serious or anything, you know”. This would all make good subject matter for that blog page of Danny’s.